diff --git a/apps/governance/src/i18n/translations/dev.json b/apps/governance/src/i18n/translations/dev.json
index 86b9666ee..e2079bb87 100644
--- a/apps/governance/src/i18n/translations/dev.json
+++ b/apps/governance/src/i18n/translations/dev.json
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
   "Showing tranches with <{{trancheMinimum}} VEGA, click to hide these tranches": "Showing tranches with ≤{{trancheMinimum}} $VEGA, click to hide these tranches",
   "Not showing tranches with <{{trancheMinimum}} VEGA, click to show all tranches": "Not showing tranches with ≤{{trancheMinimum}} $VEGA, click to show all tranches",
   "the holder": "the holder",
-  "We couldn't seem to load your data.": "We couldn't seem to load your data.",
+  "Your data couldn't be loaded": "Your data couldn't be loaded",
   "Vesting VEGA": "Vesting VEGA",
   "All the tokens in this tranche are locked and can not be redeemed yet.": "All the tokens in this tranche are locked and can not be redeemed yet.",
   "Redeem unlocked VEGA from tranche {{id}}": "Redeem unlocked $VEGA from tranche {{id}}",
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@
   "ThisWillSetEnactmentDeadlineTo": "This will set the enactment date to",
   "ThisWillSetValidationDeadlineTo": "This will set the validation deadline to",
   "Hours": "hours",
-  "ThisWillAdd2MinutesToAllowTimeToConfirmInWallet": "Note: we add 2 minutes of extra time when you choose the minimum value. This gives you time to confirm the proposal in your wallet.",
+  "ThisWillAdd2MinutesToAllowTimeToConfirmInWallet": "Note: 2 minutes of extra time are added when you choose the minimum value. This gives you time to confirm the proposal in your wallet.",
   "ProposalWillFailIfEnactmentIsEarlierThanVotingDeadline": "Proposal will fail if enactment is earlier than the voting deadline",
   "SelectAMarketToChange": "Select a market to change",
   "MarketName": "Market name",
diff --git a/apps/governance/src/routes/proposals/components/propose/proposal-form-vote-and-enactment-deadline.spec.tsx b/apps/governance/src/routes/proposals/components/propose/proposal-form-vote-and-enactment-deadline.spec.tsx
index 743f319ff..aef005c41 100644
--- a/apps/governance/src/routes/proposals/components/propose/proposal-form-vote-and-enactment-deadline.spec.tsx
+++ b/apps/governance/src/routes/proposals/components/propose/proposal-form-vote-and-enactment-deadline.spec.tsx
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ describe('Proposal form vote, validation and enactment deadline', () => {
   it('should show the correct datetimes', () => {
     renderComponent();
     // Should be adding 2 mins to the vote deadline as the minimum is set by
-    // default, and we add 2 mins for wallet confirmation
+    // default, and 2 mins are added for wallet confirmation
     expect(screen.getByTestId('voting-date')).toHaveTextContent(
       '2022-01-01T01:02:00.000Z'
     );
diff --git a/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-closing-timestamp.ts b/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-closing-timestamp.ts
index ab5c59d68..8d2eb0e82 100644
--- a/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-closing-timestamp.ts
+++ b/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-closing-timestamp.ts
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 import { addHours, getTime } from 'date-fns';
 import { addTwoMinutes, subtractTwoSeconds } from './deadline-helpers';
 
-// If the vote deadline is at its minimum, then we add 2 extra minutes to the
+// If the vote deadline is at its minimum, then 2 extra minutes are added to the
 // closing timestamp to ensure that there's time to confirm in the wallet.
 
 // If it's at its maximum, remove a couple of seconds to ensure rounding errors
diff --git a/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-enactment-timestamp.ts b/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-enactment-timestamp.ts
index 2fe4f6acc..7c79c78a2 100644
--- a/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-enactment-timestamp.ts
+++ b/libs/proposals/src/utils/get-enactment-timestamp.ts
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 import { addHours, getTime } from 'date-fns';
 import { addTwoMinutes, subtractTwoSeconds } from './deadline-helpers';
 
-// If the enactment deadline is at its minimum, then we add 2 extra minutes to the
+// If the enactment deadline is at its minimum, then 2 extra minutes are added to the
 // closing timestamp to ensure that there's time to confirm in the wallet.
 
 // If it's at its maximum, remove a couple of seconds to ensure rounding errors
diff --git a/libs/web3/src/lib/withdrawal-approval-dialog.tsx b/libs/web3/src/lib/withdrawal-approval-dialog.tsx
index 16f954113..d3cb264e0 100644
--- a/libs/web3/src/lib/withdrawal-approval-dialog.tsx
+++ b/libs/web3/src/lib/withdrawal-approval-dialog.tsx
@@ -50,8 +50,7 @@ export const WithdrawalApprovalDialog = ({
         <p>
           {t(
             `If the network is reset or has an outage, records of your withdrawal
-          may be lost. We recommend you save these details in a safe place so 
-          you can still complete your withdrawal.`
+          may be lost. It is recommended that you save these details in a safe place so you can still complete your withdrawal.`
           )}
         </p>
         {withdrawalId ? (