From c3c3494545cd78e8c2723445718f1f0280059f1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nazareno Oviedo <nazareno@basement.studio>
Date: Mon, 18 Apr 2022 22:28:34 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] feat: update content

---
 src/components/sections/about/hero/index.tsx  | 19 +++++++++--------
 src/components/sections/about/team/index.tsx  | 10 ++++-----
 .../sections/community/hero/index.tsx         |  4 ++--
 .../sections/community/socials/index.tsx      |  3 ---
 .../sections/homepage/benefits/index.tsx      | 16 +++++++-------
 .../sections/homepage/hero/index.tsx          | 13 +++++++-----
 .../sections/products/app/index.tsx           |  7 ++++---
 .../sections/products/hero/index.tsx          | 21 +++++++++----------
 .../sections/products/network/index.tsx       |  6 +++---
 .../sections/products/stack/stack.ts          |  7 +++----
 .../sections/products/token/index.tsx         |  8 ++-----
 11 files changed, 56 insertions(+), 58 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/sections/about/hero/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/about/hero/index.tsx
index 9e14e64..520ea14 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/about/hero/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/about/hero/index.tsx
@@ -39,23 +39,24 @@ const Hero = () => {
             <div>
               <Line className={s['line']} height={145} />
               <Heading as="h2" variant="sm">
-                We’re materializing a decentralized and interoperable future,
-                now.
+                We’re materializing a decentralized and interoperable future,{' '}
+                <b>now</b>
               </Heading>
             </div>
             <div>
               <p>
                 For blockchain to achieve true decentralization and wider
                 adoption, we need to expand data access, verifiability, and
-                control for decentralized application developers and users
-                around the world.
+                control for decentralized application developers and end
+                consumers around the world.
               </p>
               <p>
-                Led by a globally renowned team of platform experts across
-                Ethereum, IPLD / IPFS, and Cosmos SDK, our mission is to
-                accelerate blockchain interoperability and adoption by providing
-                decentralized application (DApp) developers and users with
-                greater access to verifiable data.
+                Led by a globally renowned team of architects and core
+                contributors across Ethereum, IPLD / IPFS, and Cosmos SDK, our
+                mission is to accelerate blockchain development,
+                interoperability, and adoption by providing decentralized
+                application (DApp) developers and users with greater access to
+                verifiable data.
               </p>
               <div>
                 <Link href="https://docs.laconic.com/faq">FAQ</Link>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/about/team/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/about/team/index.tsx
index d986252..a770e21 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/about/team/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/about/team/index.tsx
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@ const TeamSection = () => {
         <div>
           <Arrow className={s['arrow']} />
           <p>
-            Built over 4 years, Laconic is developed by renowned platform
-            experts across Ethereum, IPLD / IPFS, and Cosmos SDK. Our
-            contributing organizations are led by Ethereum architects and
-            developers who co-authored EIP-1559.
+            Built over four years, Laconic is developed by platform experts
+            across Ethereum, IPLD / IPFS, and Cosmos SDK. Our project
+            organizations are led by Ethereum architects and developers who
+            co-authored and contributed to EIP-1559.
           </p>
           <p>
-            We've successfully launched startups, and built products and
+            We’ve successfully launched startups, and built products and
             communities loved by millions of people around the world.
           </p>
         </div>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/community/hero/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/community/hero/index.tsx
index 9481c09..3832494 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/community/hero/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/community/hero/index.tsx
@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@ const Hero = () => {
             variant="primary"
             size="large"
             className={s['button']}
-            href="https://twitter.com/laconicnetwork"
+            href="https://laconic.community/"
           >
-            JOIN US
+            GET STARTED
           </ButtonLink>
         </div>
       </div>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/community/socials/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/community/socials/index.tsx
index fa7f7a1..b7b235a 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/community/socials/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/community/socials/index.tsx
@@ -29,9 +29,6 @@ const Socials = () => {
         />
         <div>
           <div className={s['header']}>
-            {/* <Heading as="h2" variant="xl" centered={false}>
-              Socials
-            </Heading> */}
             <Heading as="h2" variant="xl" centered={false}>
               Connect With Us
             </Heading>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/homepage/benefits/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/homepage/benefits/index.tsx
index 7c78607..18307d1 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/homepage/benefits/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/homepage/benefits/index.tsx
@@ -40,8 +40,11 @@ const Benefits = () => {
             provides accurate, low-cost, multi-chain verifiable data, by
             leveraging cryptographic proofs and cutting edge data caching
             engineering. <br />
-            <br /> Laconic is the only blockchain data querying solution that
-            provides cross-chain cryptographic proofs.
+            <br />{' '}
+            <b>
+              Laconic is the only blockchain data querying solution that
+              provides cross-chain cryptographic proofs.
+            </b>
           </p>
         </div>
       </Container>
@@ -71,13 +74,13 @@ const Benefits = () => {
           </div>
           <ul>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon01 />}>
-              Only solution providing Cryptographic proof
+              Only solution providing Cryptographic proofs
             </Benefit>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon02 />}>
               Composable, supports broader use cases
             </Benefit>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon03 />}>
-              From months to seconds. Quick automated setup
+              From months to minutes. Quick automated setup
             </Benefit>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon04 />}>Broad cross-chain compatibility</Benefit>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon05 />}>
@@ -85,8 +88,7 @@ const Benefits = () => {
               blockchain
             </Benefit>
             <Benefit icon={<Icon06 />}>
-              Lower development and data costs. Hundreds of times less than
-              market
+              Lower development and data costs. 100x of times less than market
             </Benefit>
           </ul>
         </Container>
@@ -118,7 +120,7 @@ const Benefits = () => {
                 Greater data access and control
               </Benefit>
               <Benefit icon={<Icon08 />}>
-                In-browser local cache, without need for data avilability layer
+                In-browser local cache, without need for data availability layer
               </Benefit>
               <Benefit icon={<Icon09 />}>
                 Optimal control of privacy levels
diff --git a/src/components/sections/homepage/hero/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/homepage/hero/index.tsx
index 1d8dc99..df385f3 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/homepage/hero/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/homepage/hero/index.tsx
@@ -24,14 +24,17 @@ const Hero = () => {
         <source src="/videos/hero-grid.mp4" type="video/mp4" />
       </video>
       <Heading as="h1" variant="xl" centered>
-        The <br className="hide-on-desktop" />{' '}
-        <HighlightedText>Multi-chain</HighlightedText> <br /> Verifiable Data
-        Marketplace
+        Build a <br className="hide-on-desktop" />{' '}
+        <HighlightedText>
+          Fast Frictionless, <br /> & Provable
+        </HighlightedText>
+        Web3
       </Heading>
       <Line className={s['line']} />
       <p>
-        From months to minutes. Laconic accelerates <br /> your DApp
-        development, interoperability, <br /> and user adoption.
+        From months to minutes. Laconic’s multi-chain verifiable data <br />{' '}
+        marketplace accelerates blockchain development, <br />
+        interoperability, and adoption
       </p>
       <Button
         variant="primary"
diff --git a/src/components/sections/products/app/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/products/app/index.tsx
index f5dd3b4..6161f43 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/products/app/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/products/app/index.tsx
@@ -14,9 +14,10 @@ const AppSection = () => {
           Laconic App
         </Heading>
         <p>
-          Laconic Wallet leverages an in-browser IPFS payment channel, enabling
-          users of the network to transact quickly and easily with LNT and ERC20
-          tokens.
+          The Laconic App leverages an in-browser IPFS payment channel, enabling
+          users of the network to transact quickly and easily with Laconic
+          Network Token (LNT) and ERC20 tokens. Users will also be able to
+          access Laconic’s liquidity <br /> pool via the App.
         </p>
       </Container>
     </Section>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/products/hero/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/products/hero/index.tsx
index 9176a98..cbee047 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/products/hero/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/products/hero/index.tsx
@@ -35,15 +35,14 @@ const Hero = () => {
           </div>
           <div className={s.text__container}>
             <p>
-              For DApp developers and users (e.g. traders), Laconic is the only
-              data solution that provides accurate, low-cost, multi-chain,
-              verifiable data, by leveraging cryptographic proofs, cutting-edge
-              data-caching engineering, and a secure verifiable data
-              marketplace:
+              Laconic is the only data solution that provides accurate,
+              low-cost, multi-chain, verifiable blockchain data by leveraging
+              cryptographic proofs, cutting-edge data-caching engineering, and a
+              secure verifiable data marketplace:
             </p>
             <div>
               <ol>
-                <li>Watchers</li>
+                <li>Laconic Watchers (SDK)</li>
                 <li>Laconic Stack</li>
                 <li>Laconic Network</li>
                 <li>Laconic App</li>
@@ -54,8 +53,8 @@ const Hero = () => {
                   DeFi
                 </Heading>
                 <p>
-                  Laconic enables simpler and more efficient DApp development,
-                  and the most flexible views of the Ethereum state.
+                  Laconic enables simple and efficient DApp development, and the
+                  most flexible views of the Ethereum state.
                 </p>
               </div>
               <div>
@@ -63,9 +62,9 @@ const Hero = () => {
                   NFTs
                 </Heading>
                 <p>
-                  In addition to any cross-chain history or metadata associated
-                  with an NFT, Laconic allows this data to be proven to
-                  end-users quickly and succinctly, simplifying deployments.
+                  Laconic exposes cross-chain history and metadata associated
+                  with an NFT, enabling provably accurate data for DApps and
+                  Marketplaces.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </div>
diff --git a/src/components/sections/products/network/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/products/network/index.tsx
index ae4c38f..a828f08 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/products/network/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/products/network/index.tsx
@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@ const Network = () => {
           </Heading>
           <p>
             An open, interoperable, verifiable data marketplace and ecosystem of
-            service providers, DApp operators, and users providing low-cost,
-            decentralized, and disintermediated horizontal scaling solutions for
-            projects leveraging Laconic Stack.
+            service providers, DApp operators, and data consumers providing
+            low-cost, decentralized, and disintermediated horizontal scaling
+            solutions for projects leveraging Laconic Stack.
           </p>
           <img
             className={s.network__img__mobile}
diff --git a/src/components/sections/products/stack/stack.ts b/src/components/sections/products/stack/stack.ts
index a769188..e6845f4 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/products/stack/stack.ts
+++ b/src/components/sections/products/stack/stack.ts
@@ -5,8 +5,7 @@ export const stackData = [
   },
   {
     title: 'Watcher Service',
-    content:
-      'Allows services or browsers to subscribe to data Supplementary Services'
+    content: 'Allows services or browsers to subscribe to data'
   },
   {
     title: 'Tracing Service',
@@ -14,10 +13,10 @@ export const stackData = [
   },
   {
     title: 'Eth State Diff Service',
-    content: 'Serves state diffs from an offline geth database'
+    content: 'Serves state diffs from an offline Geth database'
   },
   {
     title: 'Pending Transaction Service',
-    content: 'Ethereum node, ipld-eth-server, and relational database'
+    content: 'Provides real-time transaction pool data'
   }
 ]
diff --git a/src/components/sections/products/token/index.tsx b/src/components/sections/products/token/index.tsx
index b1ce30a..3833175 100644
--- a/src/components/sections/products/token/index.tsx
+++ b/src/components/sections/products/token/index.tsx
@@ -29,10 +29,6 @@ const Token = () => {
               <img src="/images/products/tk-01.png" alt="" />
               <p>Distribute rewards to staked users</p>
             </div>
-            <div>
-              <img src="/images/products/tk-02.png" alt="" />
-              <p>Pay dividends to Partners</p>
-            </div>
             <div>
               <img src="/images/products/tk-03.png" alt="" />
               <p>Provide service discounts</p>
@@ -40,8 +36,8 @@ const Token = () => {
             <div>
               <img src="/images/products/tk-04.png" alt="" />
               <p>
-                Distribute funds to community members for Network maintenance
-                and development
+                Distribute funds to community participants for Network
+                maintenance and development
               </p>
             </div>
           </div>